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雅思口語Part1話題滿分作文Parks

2024-07-14 15:07:15 來源:中國教育在線

隨著留學市場的不斷發(fā)展,越來越多的學生選擇留學。如果你也是想要留學的學生之一,那么你就需要參加語言考試,其中雅思托福就是最為常見的英語考試,下面中國教育在線外語頻道小編就為大家介紹一下雅思口語Part1話題滿分作文:Parks。

雅思口語Part1話題滿分作文:Parks

1. Do you like parks? Why / why not?

Yes, I like parks because they're great places to relax or go for a walk. I think every

city needs some green space where people can escape from the crowds.

解讀:這個答案看似稀松平常,但其實烤鴨還是可以從中學習一二??辞熬?,講理由時“they are great places to relax or go for a walk”,捫心自問的話,我們在面臨相同語境時,往往容易說隨口成“people can relax or go for a walk in parks”,兩句話的高下立現。究其原因,是因為考官的回答,是緊抓著topic,以park為描述的對象,以其為中心展開句子,所以,顯得表意強力,同時也符合英語的表達習慣。第二句可以說是升華句,要知道對于雅思口語part1的問題,2句話便是足夠好的答案。simon在此處可以說很帶感的講述了park對于城市人的意義:green space where people can escape from the crowds,簡潔而富感染力。

2. How often do you visit parks?

There's a park very close to where I live, so I probably go there once or twice a week if the weather's nice.

點評:本回答的亮點是” There's a park very close to where I live”和” if the weather's nice”,可以說作者很清晰直白地向我們展示了如何將一個貧瘠的雅思口語回答”I probably go there once or twice a week”優(yōu)化得有血有肉的過程。最終回答是簡潔而真實。

3. Why are parks an important part of many towns and cities?

Parks are like an oasis where people get away from the hustle and bustle of city life. They are where people go to have lunch, to take some exercise, or to forget about work for a while.

點評:作者在此回答中開始了炫技。詞法上有:oasis, get away from, the hustle and bustle;句法上則是連續(xù)的兩個where的從句(前者是定從,后者是表從)。與問題1的回答相同,依然是緊抓parks作為敘述的主角,而不是作為people的配角。

4. What do you think could be done to make parks better?

The parks in big cities are already really good in my opinion. If I think about the famous parks in London, Paris or New York, I can't imagine what I would do to improve them.

點評:這個雅思口語答案有點無厘頭。但是作者也在向我們展示如何對一個自身不太了解的問題打太極的方式:問有何改進之處,答曰好到不能再好了。

關于Park的周邊詞匯和表達

Greenery,majestic scenery 令人贊嘆的景色,A gem of a park,Grassy areas

Entry price 門票,Bland 普普通通的,無個性的,Package tourist 成群結隊的游客

In the heart of the city 在城市的中心,It is a vantage point on the city

Make it there 到那兒,Blossom season 花季,a widely varied landscape

a wonderful amenity for rest and relaxation休閑放松的絕佳場所

The excellent design of the pathways and roads within the park itself deserves special mention

Yearning to escape the crowd, wander off the beaten track and get back to nature

Hordes of people 成群的人,A Wealth of plants 豐富的植物,Recharge/unwind 充電,放松

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